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Friday, August 23, 2019

my story

This is my story l wrote after l watched the music video called So Good To Me .l chose this video because they play hide and seek. The giraffe hides behinds the trees .I hope you enjoy my story .


One day there was a girl  walking down the stairs. She was happy and excited going down the stairs.

The girl was looking for her pet but she couldn't find her pet. She was sad because she couldn't find it.

She went and sat on the swing. Suddenly she had an idea.

She made posters and put the posters up on trees. She went up to  different people’s houses.

She went to the school to see if her pet was there but it was not there. She went  to the park and her pet came up to her.

They played hide and seek. She found the giraffe. It was by the tree

1 comment:

  1. Hi there I looked on your story but next time say why she was happy and excited but i like it . it was fantastic i really like the way you said what she was doing when you said that she made poster and put the posters up on the trees because it tells me what she was doing Did you know that when you said suddenly she had an idea that just hooked me on to the story.from your buddy

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