Kia ora everyone ,today i am going to share my first draft of some of my writhing i have done about Returning to school our teacher gave us some instructions in to write about how we were feeling about going back to school. can u tell me some tips .
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Monday, May 25, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Myla, Like your returning to school. I just noticed that on the end of your comment for the start of the blog.You have forgot to put a capital letter. I really like the way you put your feelings and put why you were felling that way! You also forgot to put a full stop? Next time put some
ReplyDeletemore feelings and more sentence.
If you jumped off your bed Myla,does that mean you were standing on it?.That's an interesting way to sleep....what have you enjoyed most about being back?.
ReplyDeleteHello Myla.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.
Hello Myla.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I can't wait to see what other work you have been doing in class.Have a great week.
Hello Myla.
ReplyDeleteJust a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I look forward to seeing some more of the learning you have been doing in class soon.