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Monday, May 25, 2020

Returning to school writhing

Kia ora  everyone ,today i am going to share my first draft of some of my writhing i have done about   Returning to school our  teacher gave us some instructions in to write about how we were  feeling about going back to school. can u tell me some tips .

5 comments:

  1. Hi Myla, Like your returning to school. I just noticed that on the end of your comment for the start of the blog.You have forgot to put a capital letter. I really like the way you put your feelings and put why you were felling that way! You also forgot to put a full stop? Next time put some
    more feelings and more sentence.

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  2. If you jumped off your bed Myla,does that mean you were standing on it?.That's an interesting way to sleep....what have you enjoyed most about being back?.

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  3. Hello Myla.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.

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  4. Hello Myla.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I can't wait to see what other work you have been doing in class.Have a great week.

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  5. Hello Myla.
    Just a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I look forward to seeing some more of the learning you have been doing in class soon.

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