the present

Good morning today am going to show you my writing at i have been doing for the past weeks it is all about the present  this is my writing  it was all about a dog that have one leg .We had to watch a video 

after  at we have  to writ a story  about it .If you have some  i dare for some blogs at i can do  .

 One day there was a boy   that was playing video games. The tv was very bright  that  you can see the tv in his lovely eyes they  were brown he was playing  video games  all Day. Them had a lovely mum come home and said sorry i was a bit late  she came  in the door with a big   box that looked like  chocolate  Ice cream his mum said it was a present for you. Mum opened up the blinds and said it is a lovely day to go outside . The phone  was calling so  she answered  the phone then she went up the stairs  .He was looking at the box he  open  the box up halfway  then a dog jump out them the boy was very excited  them he look at the dog legs he saw that the dog that the dog was missing one  legs the boy didn't  not care about  it he  dog he Chat  the dog on the floor  them  the dog  want up to the boy  and  bark and bark and bark them he kicked the dog   and said get lots said the boy the  dog  saw a ball he  went to go  and get it them he roll it to the boy the boy saw the ball  and he  kicked the ball in to a box then he keep falling over them he went to get the ball in the box then he got stuck in the box them the dog was all over the pace then the  dog roll the ball to the boy then the boy got the small red ball and put in his Pockets  them the boy got up and got his crutches and went outside before they  went outside the dog was vary happy the the dog and the boy went outside the dog and the boy was vary happy.

When the boy was playing the game the tv was very bright you can see the tv in his lovely eyes .