Hello readers what could i do to improve my drawing I have done it for the flower festival here is a photo of my drawing hope you have a good day bye .
Wednesday, October 14, 2020
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Hi Myla. I like that you have made the petals separate to each other. I think it would be good if you looked more closely at the shape of each petal. Can you see how they come to a little point at the top? Can you do that with yours?
ReplyDeleteHello Myla.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way that you have drawn the petals.You have given it a lot of thought and you have done a super job.Maybe have a look at how the tips of the petals are?.Keep up the super drawings and good luck at the Flower Show.