Kia ora people ,
This week we have been learning about recount. A recount is a story and you have to use I because you are part of the story and we use past tense in a recount. Our lovey teacher showed us a story about robbery animation so I have to be the one in the story here is my recount writing. I hope you like have a good day bye.
outside the diary. I noticed that there was one men wearing a brown ski mask he have very big eyebrows and big fat lips . I noticed that it was very strange because in mover they have then for robber . There was a other one men in the car he have a blue hoodie and he have big lips and eyebrows he have on ski mask so he have to put the hoodie on because he did not have one . The tow men walked towards to the dairy the little men walk into the door he was think that it was open the bigger men open the door the little man have a big bag he put it up on the table and said .
Hello Myla.
ReplyDeleteI did have a laugh when the robber walked into the window.I don't think he would make the most intelligent robber.I'm just glad that he wasn't driving.He night of ended up driving into the dairy instead of parking where the tall robber did.
What do you think they wanted the money from the dairy for?.